What would you have done different on this one?Honest opinions please.by the way,hi,I'm new here.
In The End
We all live with the hope
that in the end
all will be explained
that all our tears will be justified
the tears we cried in shame
that common sense will be defied
that there is a reason for our pain
that there is someone there
beyond deaths door
to show us that there is much more
that someone there will tell us why
my grandpa had to die?
the stars are in the sky?
and why is pain allowed?
that is what we'd ask him
this person in the clowd
that we all hope to see
everyone expects to see him
everyone except for me
for me I know theres nothing there
and I'll never have a fear
I'll not wait for a message
that god will never send
and you all don't comprehend
that in the end
theres nothing there
roger
In The End
We all live with the hope
that in the end
all will be explained
that all our tears will be justified
the tears we cried in shame
that common sense will be defied
that there is a reason for our pain
that there is someone there
beyond deaths door
to show us that there is much more
that someone there will tell us why
my grandpa had to die?
the stars are in the sky?
and why is pain allowed?
that is what we'd ask him
this person in the clowd
that we all hope to see
everyone expects to see him
everyone except for me
for me I know theres nothing there
and I'll never have a fear
I'll not wait for a message
that god will never send
and you all don't comprehend
that in the end
theres nothing there
roger
"The five divide the One into the ten thousand"-me
